Good mix,sounds like Pink Floyds music

Great job, sounds like very early Pink Floyd.

Very Floyd-y, but a bit out of tune, don't you think?

Wow, thanks for the references to Pink Floyd folks. They're my favorite band. Out of tune......? I doubt it as all of the guitars that I used on it were tuned with the same digital tuner right before recording. However, I may have "over-stretched" a few of the strings on some of lead parts. Thanks for listening to it and the review Mike-S, I appreciate it.

Learn how to sing. This is absolutely horrid. The zip percussion thing is a horrible fit in this song. It is unlistenable! How did so many of your songs end up bunched together in the top 10...voting for yourself?

Yeah, like I can vote for myself. Let's hear some of your work!

There are a lot of people who have multiple log-ins on this site that vote for themselves many times. If you are stating that you don't do that, then I accept your word. Sorry to have made a false accusation.

My 'work' may not be music that everyone or even you like, but it is always on key and in time. I listen to playbacks with a very critical ear dozens and dozens of times and if I record a vocal or guitar part that is out of key or out of time (as all musicians, even professionals do)...I re-do it. Sometimes I hear the problem on the 20th playback. That much attention to detail is what is required to make professional sounding music. I also realize I come across very negative sometimes. I'll work on being more constructive.

Thanks a bunch, I wish I had the time to even record, let alone edit play-backs.

If I had any underwear on I'd throw them on your cyber-stage! Rock on, Wayne!

WOW, I will indeed consider that a compliment. Thanks RebelChick66.

Got to agree with music guy. Very pitchy in the vocal department. But I didn't mind the percussion. Interesting guitar tone. I'm not saying this to be mean but simply to be helpful. Focus on getting your pitch under control and the accessibility (listenability) of your music will increase exponentially.