18 reviews for this song.
It may be a little "Fuzzy", I wrote it about my EX-daughter-in-law and she has way too much "FUZZ' between her ears!
I can hear a song in there.. I read what you said about your vocals, but they would be best at the next octave up. With a more driving guitar it would not drag as it does. It has a good hook!!! The lead guitar is right on,,, the rhythm giutar needs to drive harder.. more out front...
Reviewed By theRoad at 2009-09-01 10:49:04
I did the rhythm guitars on an amplified, mixed and voiced Yamaha Jumbo-body accoustic guitar. I didn't want to over-do the rhythm too much but I agree with you that it needs to crunch a bit more.
Thank you so much for the input, it's very much appreciated.
I hear lots some potential in this!
I mean lots of potential, or some serious potential. I must be DIXLESIC?
Very good lyrics,we've all been there
Really good. You gonna do a CD sometime?
You did a wonderful job on this song. Anyone who has had this type of experience will find it meaningful. Good job.
Hey Wayne, still digging your guitar sound! When do we get to hear a new Wayne Richey tune? Anyhow hope all is well and it looked like you could use a review! Just like everyone else that isn't in the click that is: "Amaze.fm" Take care and get that spelling on your last name looked at!
Thanks Micheal. I've got a few new tunes I've been working on in the studio. I just never seem to find the time to get them wrapped up. I have 9 full versions of the same tune that I just can't get done to my liking.
I'll try to get something new for you soon.
Is there any possibility of a melody showing up in this song? Perfectly horrible...disturbing.
Wow, thanks for the negativity Musicguy098.
You must be really good to be able to write that.
I wrote the song about an event that still haunts me.
My ex-daughter-in-law inspired it.
I don't recall you ever giving a positive review for anyone's tunes.
If you can't say anything nice then maybe you should just STFU!
Wayne - Yes, my review was negative and I should have found a better and more constructive way to express it. I have given many positive and constructive reviews. It was the 4th or 5th song of yours in a row that I had listened to that didn't have much melody and I wanted to tell you that. However, using the words 'horrible' and 'disturbing' were the wrong words and I apologize to you for that. I know the song means a lot to you and probably your son also. I would encourage you in the future, especially when writing about things that are especially meaningful to focus more on that aspect of your music. This one is 3 minutes, 6 seconds of the exact same melody repeating itself. Telling me to STFU is going a bit far also.
Sorry about my negativity towards your review. You actually made a lot of sense after I re-read it. You mentioned specific details and problems with the tune that I have taken to heart. Thanks for your reviews, they have helped.
No worries Wayne - I also erred in my communication. God bless you for putting your music out there, it is meaningful for you when you right about a personal issue and I am sure that it will find people to whom it will also have meaning through similar experiences. I would encourage you to keep doing it. At the end of the day, I'm not always right either, they are just opinions. I'll take this to heart also about how to express it in a more effective way.
I meant to say when you 'write'...not when you 'right'. What a doofus!
Such a catchy song!
Keep playing the guitar and ignore those "constructive" reviews!
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